Jumat, 03 Desember 2010

Chapter 4(1st Part): The Virtual Training

Narrator:”When they get out from the temple, a troop of monsters approached them.”
Mons. Leader:”I am Jackrow, the servant of Dhana. I come here to bring an end to all of you. My troop! Go Kill Them!”
Yosua:”Hey students! Time to test your new weapons!”
Hans:”Hey, ring! Get my magic staff out.”
Hans’ Ring:”Yes, master!”
Narrator:”The ring shone and changed into a magic staff.”
Hans:”Magic staff! I command you to send rain of fires to the monsters!”
Narrator:”The magic staff sent out rain of fires from the sky and hit the monsters.”
Hans:”Yes! It’s a strike! Hahaha! Bryan! It’s your turn!”
Bryan:”Hey, sword! Wind Slasher!”
Narrator:”When Bryan swung the sword, even if the sword didn’t touch the monsters’ body, the monsters’ body was cut into half and they disappeared.”
Bryan:”Yiiihhhaa!! Hey Raica! It’s your turn! Finish that monsters!”
Raica:”Speedy Machine Gun Hits!”
Narrator:”Raica ran to the monsters and hit them one by one with a speed of light and the monsters was now totally gone.”
Narrator:”After all of the monsters was defeated, only Jackrow left behind.”
Hans:”Hey, Jackrow! Let me bring you to your end now!”
Yosua:”Stop Hans! Don’t attack him! Your power can’t defeat him! Let me finish him!”
Yosua:”The spirit of Wolf! If you hear me, please come to me and hear my command!”
Jackrow:”My spirit of snake will beat your old wolf! Spirit of snake! Come to me and hear my command!”
Narrator:”A wolf and a snake appeared transparently and were ready to fight.”
Yosua:”Hey Jackrow! Is that a rope or a snake? Hahaha! My wolf will eat that snake now. Hey wolfy! Eat that snake! That will be your food for today! Wolf Slash and Bite!”
Narrator:”The wolf catched the snake’s tail, threw it up high and when the snake fell down, the wolf ate it in one gulp.”
Jackrow:”No way! Owh no! I will be dead right now!”
Yosua:”Hey, wolf! Now eat Jackrow! He is very tasty! Go eat him!”
Narrator:”So, the wolf ran toward Jackrow fastly, bite him and Jackrow disappeared.”
Yosua:”Good wolf! Now, go back to your habitat! Hahaha!”
Hans:”Yes! Hey, Sensei! We win! This is our first battle and we win! Yey!”
Bryan:”Yeah! We win!”
Narrator:”After that battle, they all went to the Lava River.”
Yosua:”Hey, Hans! Use you magic staff to make a way for us to cross the Lava River now! Faster!”
Hans:”Yes, Sensei!”
Hans:”Magic staff! I command you to divide the Lava River into two and make a way for us!”
Narrator:”Then, the magic staff shone and the Lava River was divided into two and make a dry way for them to pass by.”
Hans:”Run now! Go! Go! Go! The lava can only stay divided for a few seconds!”
Narrator:”So, they run as fast as they could and luckily they passed the Lava River before the way is closed.”
Bryan:”Fyuh! Tough luck, huh?”
Raica:”Hahaha! Yeah! Tough luck!”
Yosua:”Students! Behold, the mansion of Sensei Christopher…”
Bryan:”Let’s go and check it out!”
Hans:”Anyone here?” *knocking the door*
Narrator:”The door is opened by a strange creature with a lava clothing. It attacked Hans.”
Someone:”Golva! Stop! Get to your chamber now! I am sorry for that. That is my pet named Golva. It is a lava golem.”
Hans:”Lava Golem!? Cool! Interesting! Fantastic! Bombastic!”
Raica:”Hans, aren’t your dialect is too hyperbole? Hahaha!”
Hans:”Hahaha! Maybe!”
Yosua:”Hi, Christopher! Remember me? I am Yosua! Your old friend!”
Christopher:”Ow Yeah! Long time no see, Yosua! Hahaha!”
Yosua:”This is my students. Hans, the magic master. Bryan, the warrior master. And Raica, the defender master.”
Christopher:”Cool! Ok! Come in and I will show you all what training is all about.”
Narrator:”They all went inside Christopher’s house and saw many dangerous weapons and a virtual room.”
Christopher:”Ladies and gentlemen, this is my precious training room. My student often train here. Wanna try to train here? When you sit at the virtual chair, your spirit will go inside the virtual world. I have many NPC inside the virtual world. They will help you to pass the training one by one. But, remember one thing, if you are killed at the virtual world. It means you’re killed at the real world. So, wanna try?”
Hans:”I will never give up! I’ll try!
Bryan:”I will never turn back and just run away! I’ll try!”
Raica:”Nothing will stop me! I’ll try it too!”
Christopher:”Yosua. Your students have a tough attitudes and and a nice bravery.”
Narrator:”So, Hans, Bryan, and Raica sat at the virtual chair and their adventure at the virtual world began.”

Sabtu, 27 November 2010

Chapter 3: The Owner of Suzaku

Narrator:”After taking a rest for a whole day, they continued their journey.”
Narrator:”Seiryu and Byako heard that sound and change into creatures again.”
Yosua:”Today, our destination is the Village of Yang. The owner of Suzaku is predicted to come and train there everyday.”
Hans:”Is that village is the mate of the Village of Yin?”
Yosua:”Exactly, Hans.”
Bryan:”So, it is probably a deserted village too.”
Yosua:”Yea….. Maybe.”
Narrator:”They walk for a few hours and they are inside the Village of Yang.”
Yosua:”Every village has a temple or a shrine. Let us check it. People usually go there to train.”
Narrator:”So, they search for a temple for a minute and find it near the graveyard of Yang.”
Hans:”A temple beside the graveyard….. Wow. It must be creepy.”
Bryan:”Ow Hans. Don’t scare me please.”
Yosua:”Let us go inside and check it out.”
*Inside the temple*
Bryan:”Hey, Guys. Check this out! I found a scroll.”
Stranger:”Hey! That’s mine! Don’t touch it! Leave it or I will kill you…”
Bryan:”Wouw..wouw…wouw…! No! I am not a thief. I will give it to you back. I am only searching for a teenager which is the owner of Suzaku here.”
Stranger:”Ow… Sorry. But, the one you’re searching for is me. I am the owner of Suzaku, the God of Phoenix. My name is Raica.”
Hans:”I don’t believe you if I don’t fight with you. Come on! Fight with me.”
Bryan:”What!? Hey, Hans. Are you crazy? Do you see her hands and legs? It is full of blood and scars. That means that she really train hard everyday.”
Hans:”For me, this is a training.”
Bryan:”Ok..... I wanna see your action. Go.. Go!”
Hans:”Here we go! “
Raica:”Cece Gule Gule Fista Fista Langga Langga Dilangga!”
Narrator:”A phoenix came out from Raica’s body.”
Yosua:”It is Suzaku! Wow!”
Hans:”Cece Gule Gule Fista Fista Langga Langga Dilangga!”
Narrator:”Then, Seiryu came out and Hans closed his eyes, concentrate his chakra to all spots of his body and burst it out.”
Hans:”Chakra Burst!”
Raica:”Suzaku! Blast out fireballs!”
Narrator:”Many fireballs is spitted out from Suzaku’s mouth and went to Hans.”
Hans:”I am not that easy to lose, Raica.”
Narrator:”Hans’ chakra reflect back the fireballs to Raica.”
Raica:”Cih! Machine Gun Hits!“
Narrator:“Raica hit all of the fireballs and the fireballs quickly disappeared.”
Bryan:”Wow! Cool! Amazing!”
Raica:”Speed Punch!”
Narrator:”Raica ran to Hans with a speed of light and hit him with a powerful punch.”
*Sound Effect*:”BBBUUUAAAKKK!!!
Narrator:”Hans fainted and Seiryu disappeared.”
Bryan:”One down, one to go! It’s my turn!”
Narrator:”Bryan concentrates his chakra at his leg do a break dance and burst it out.”
Bryan:”Hhahaha!! Break Dance of Chakra!”
Narrator:”Many illusions of Byako came out from Bryan’s legs and hit Raica. Raica lose.”
Bryan:”Yey! I win! Hey, Hans! Wake up, Hans!”
Hans:”Eeehhh….. I think that I have a nightmare….”
Raica:”Ok… I lose. I give up.”
Yosua:”Hey, Raica! We need your power to defeat the evilness of Azkha Xin O’ Desh. Do you want to follow us? After this, we will go to search for the owner of Genbu.”
Raica:”The owner of Genbu? I know where she is! She is living beside the Kingdom of Hell. Yeah…. I wanna follow you all. I know so much information about Arlan!”
Raica:”That is the nickname for Azkha Xing O’ Desh.”
Hans:”Ohh, I see. Ok! A hundred of wonderful journey is waiting for us! Come on! Don’t waste our time.”
Narrator:”Suddenly, Raica’s scroll fly toward Hans.”
Scroll:”Take one of the 4 rings inside me, Hans.”
Hans:”Wow! A talking scroll! Interesting. Ok. I’ll take this one!”
Scroll:”Imagine any weapon, guardian, or anything. It will appear from the ring. The ring can store up Imaginative items and guardians inside it.”
Bryan:”Wow! Cool! I want one!”
Raica:”Yea… I’ll take one too. These rings is only for the 4 owner of the legendary creatures.”
Yosua:”No… It must be that I have one. There must be 5 rings. It is the dream that tells me that. And it is taken by Dhana, the assistant of Arlan. He use it to make the 8 strongest darkness guardian. They are called the ‘Dark Eightiest’.”
Narrator:”After Hans, Raica, and Bryan use the rings, the ring said something.”
Rings:”Please close your eyes and imagine your first item or guardian, Master.”
Hans:”Cool! A talking ring!”
Narrator:”So, Hans, Bryan, and Raica closed their eyes. They imagined their weapon or guardian. Then, they opened their eyes again. And the item that they want was in front of them. ”
Hans:”Yes! A magic staff!”
Bryan:”An elemental sword! Woohooo!”
Raica:”Yes! A Magic Robe!”
Yosua:”Ok then. You all has gotten your new power. Now, let’s head to the next place which is the house of my friend, Sensei Christopher at the bank of Lava River.”
Hans:”A new sensei! That means a new training! Yep! Lets go!”
Bryan:”Wew…. Lava River…”
Raica:”Ok, then! Let’s move out! C’mon!”

Rabu, 24 November 2010

Chapter 2: Training and Journey

Narrator:"After 5 hours of walking to the next place to find the other owner of the legendary creatures, they find a temple."
Hans:"Maybe, we'll take a rest for a while at this temple."
Yosua:"No time to rest, Hans! Let us do our first training here now. We have no time to waste. I will teach you the technique of controlling your chakra and spiritual energy. Every person has their own way in controlling and releasing it. Hans and Bryan! Release your creatures and I'll ask them to teach you. Come on!"
Bryan:"Hey, Hans! Time to rock!"
Hans and Bryan:"Cece Gule Gule Fista Fista Langga Langga Dilangga!"
Narrator:"Seiryu and Byako came out from their body."
Yosua:"Seiryu! Byako! Hear me! GogagigagegogagigagegogagigageKO!!!"
Narrator:"After hearing that, Seiryu and Byako transform into a human."
Yosua:"Dimension training start!"
Narrator:"Hans and Seiryu goes into a dimension. Bryan and Byako goes into a different dimension."
*At Hans' dimension*
Hans:"Where am I?"
Seiryu:"We are in the dimension that Sensei Yosua has made. I am here to be your teacher to conrol your chakra and spiritual energy. First, sit down, close your eyes, be calm, and concentrate your chakra and spiritual power into 1 point.
Hans:"What!? 1 day? I don't have much time, Seiryu."
Seiryu:"One day at this dimension is one minute at the real world."
Hans:"Owh... I see."
Narrator:"So, Hans follow Seiryu's direction and meditate for 1 day at that dimension. Bryan did the same thing.”
*At Bryan’s dimension*
Bryan:”Yeah… I can feel my chakra flowing throughout my body. Hey, Byako! May I  try to release my chakra now? I have meditate for a half day”
Byako:”No. Meditate for 1 day and you will feel the real one.”
Bryan:”Ok. Yayaya!”
Narrator:”One day had passed. Now, Hans and Bryan will show their creatures what they have got from 1 day of meditating.”
*At Hans dimension*
Seiryu:”Hey, Hans. Follow me. I will bring you to the shrine of statues.”
*At the shrine*
Seiryu:”At this shrine, there are thousands of statues. Destroy it with 1 release of your chakra. I know you can do it.”
Hans:”Ok. I’ll try.”
Narrator:”Hans closed his eyes and concentrate his chakra and spiritual energy at his both hands.”
Hans:”Ok… I am feeling it know. HHHHYYYYAAA!! Chakra Burst!”
Narrator:”When Hans release his chakra, all the statues become dust at a second and the shrine was going to be destroyed.”
Seiryu:”Wow! What a great power! Hey, Hans. You have a more powerful chakra then I expected. Even this shrine can’t hold your power. Let us get out of here. Come on!”
Hans:”GO go go go! Run! Come on! The shrine is destroyed! GO!”
Narrator:”Hans and Seiryu run fastly and luckily, they’re save.”
Hans:”Hoh… hoh…. Hoh….! Fyuh! Lucky! Hei, Seiryu! Do I pass this first training?”
Seiryu:”Yeah… You pass. Sensei Yosua would be glad to hear this. Hahaha… You may take a rest today.”
Hans:”Yes!!! Yiiihhhaaa! I can do it!”
Narrator:” So Hans is the first person to get out from the dimension. While Bryan…..”
*At Bryan’s dimension*
Byako:”Hey, Bryan. Follow me to the court of GONG.”
Bryan:”Court of GONG? Weird name for a court. Hahaha. Ok.”
*At the court*
Byako:”At this court, there are thousands of gongs. Try to destroy it in one release of chakra and spiritual energy.”
Bryan:”OK. I’ll try.”
Narrator:”Bryan concentrate his chakra and spiritual energy at his leg.”
Bryan:”All right. Now I’m gonna release it with a cool way. HHIIAA!! Break dance of Chakra!”
Narrator:”Bryan did a break dance and chakra get out from his leg fastly. The chakra hit the gong and slash the gong one by one.”
Byako:”Wow! Really fantastic! Hahaha! Maybe, you’re the coolest magician among all magician in the world. Hahaha. You pass the training, Bryan.”
Bryan:”Of course I pass! Yes! Yes! Yes!”
Narrator:”So Bryan and Byako get out from the dimension too and they take a rest for that whole day with Seiryu, Hans, and Sensei Yosua.”

Sabtu, 20 November 2010

Chapter 1: Village of Yin

Narrator:"For 3 days and 2 nights Hans travel according the map that he had."
Hans:"I am so tired.... But I must never give up!"
Narrator:"So Hans continue walking to the Village of Yin. And slow but sure, he had came into the Village of Yin."
Hans:"What village is this? It doesn't seems to be a village. This looks like a deserted village."*looking around the village*
Narrator:"Then, He saw a dojo."
Hans:"Wow! A dojo! I should go inside it! Maybe, I can find somebody!"*going inside the dojo*
Hans:"Anyone here? I am looking for the owner of Byako that is said to be here! Please answer me, Anyone!"
Narrator:"After Hans shouted, someone come from the darkness."
Bryan:"I am the owner of Byako. My name is Bryan. Nice to meet you. What is your name?"
Hans:"Hello, Bryan. My name is Hans, the owner of Seiryu. Nice to meet you too."
Narrator:"Then, someone came again."
Someone:"What the light has said to me is right. I will meet the owner of Seiryu and the owner of Byako here."
Hans:"Who are you?"*Taking his double dagger given from his father*
Someone:"Wait, wait, wait! I am not a bad guy! Be calm. I am Sensei Yosua and I am here to train and lead the 4 owner of the legendary creatures to fight Azkha Xing O' Desh."
Hans:"Sensei Yosua! I am sorry for what I have done. I apologize Sensei!"
Yosua:"Its ok, Hans. Now, show me your Seiryu. I wanna see the proof that you're the owner of Seiryu."
Hans:"But, I don't kow how to do that."
Bryan:"Hahaha! You are the owner of Seiryu but you don't know how to release Seiryu. Hahaha! That's funny. I'll teach you. Follow my words.Cece Gule Gule Fista Fista Langga Langga di Langga.

Hans:"Hhhmmm.. It seems that I understand that language. I must try. Cece Gule Gule Fista Fista Langga Langga di Langga.
Narrator:"Then, the spirit of Seiryu get out from Hans' body and the spirit of Byako get out from Bryan's body."
Seiryu and Byako:"Ggggrrroooaaaarrr!!!"
Hans:"Hei Seiryu! Come back to my body!"
Bryan:"Hei Byako! Come back to my body!"
Narrator:"Then, Seiryu and Byako get back to Hans' and Bryan's body."
Hans:"Wow! That is the coolest thing that I have ever done! Hahaha."
Yosua:"Ok then, time to move on!"
Narrator:"So they continue their journey to find the other owner of the legendary creatures and defeat Azkha Xing O' Desh."

Magic and Wizard

Narrator:"Long time ago, there lived a little boy name Hans. When Hans was born, there was a dragon tatoo at his forehead. It disappeared when Hans was 1 years old. When, he was 12 years old, he moves from his hometown, China, to a village called "The Village of Light".
Hans:"Wow! This village is better than China. The wind breeze is fresher here. No air is polluted here. It is all fresh here. I like this village!"
Hans Mom:"Hans! Come on! It's night already! Get to sleep!"
Hans:"Yes mom! I coming!"
Narrator:"That night, hans dreamed about the 4 legendary creatures in China. He sees 4 creatures which were Seiryu the dragon, Byako the tiger, Genbu the Turtle, and Suzaku the phoenix. Suddenly, Seiryu goes inside Hans body."
Hans:"GGGGYYYAAA!!!*wake up at the midnight*"
Narrator:"After Hans had woke up, a shining light appeared infront of him."
Light:"Hans... I am Seiryu. The God of dragon. You will get my power for I have chose you to be my owner. The God of Darkness, Azkha Xing O' Desh, has awoken from his death. Head to the village of Yin and train yourself there. There, you will find your path as a magician to save the world from Azkha Xing O' Desh. YOu will find the owner of Byako too at the vilage of Yin."
Narrator:"After saying that, the light disappeared and Hans fell asleep again."
Hans:"Hhhoooaaahhhmmm!! What a strange night. But I feel that it is real. I must go ask my mom and dad for permission to go for a big adventure!"*waking up*
Hans:*going to the living room*"Mom! Dad! I wanna go out for a very big adventure, the world needs my help. May I go out for that long journey?"
Mom:"Of course you can! So pack up your things and go! Come on son!"
Hans:"Yey! Thx mom! I love you!"
Narrator:"After packing up his things, Hans go out from the Village of Light and started his journey. And now the adventure to save the world begin......"
Hi all! My name is Hans Aditya Prathama, a teenager which likes high imagination. I like to make stories about sci-fi fiction. I get many inspiration from films that I watched. I like to watch films about adventure, legend, magic, motivating story, and any other imaginative films. I want to share my sci-fi fiction stories through this blogspot. Maybe 1 chapter will take a long time for me to make. But, just be patient, for I will bring you to the world full of imagination!!!